yeh i sed 2 john i think that we cud explain the murder with the bloke being programmed/brain washed to kill... cant remember if u likerd the idea but this is how it cud fit into wht we hav already...
shot of man looking out window, cuts to the drinks closeup of the woman stirring a drink, cut back to the midshot of the man who this time has been distracted because his cell is ringing, he answers it, the codeword 'rosebud' (or whteva) is read to him over the cell, cut to a closeup of the phone falling to the floor and then graphic match (i think) to a closeup of the drink the woman was stirring being put back on the table... man kills woman like discussed before...man is slouched over watching her die, the noise of the cell ringing from offscreeen is heard, it is accentuated that this snaps the man out of his daze, he walks over to the phone and the voice says, now i'm going to count to three... one, two, three, ... and that could be the end of the opening orrrrrr the thing on the bus orrrrrr has any one else had any further thoughts on the idea / ending ?? comment ples!!!!
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Hmmm... not sure about the "three two one..." bit. Also, I'm not sure this would be as much of a shock to the audience, it gives them a bit of a clue. Still, you have got a point that we might have to make it more explicit about the programmed thing...
Sorta liking the plan, the idea of a programed killer rocks pretty hard but Jon is right it would give it away a bit. (maybe we could do a flashback).
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