OK I have an idea for the final idea. Basically we scrap everyone else's ideas and just go with Toms.
We start with a montage of footage of the protagonist getting ready, but at this point it is uncertain who the protagonist is. For instance we see him picking up his brief case and putting something in it, then we see him on the phone (presumably talking to the contact), then we see him walking out the door. This is overlaid with the credits
We then use Toms idea but just after hes been shot it cuts to him talking about what he is going to do, over the phone. We still assume he is talking to the contact when he says something that makes us realise that he is talking to the hobo girl. Duh duh duh (music).
It then cuts back to a low angled shot looking up over the now dead contact towards the protagonist picking up the money/ brief case. Then does the gun/money bit with jacket before it finishes with him walking towards the camera with him reciting something like "they want whats in the brief case, she wants money and I want revenge. One down two to go." Bit cliché but we can sort that bit out.
Also I will finish the other story boards when everyone returns as this will mean I wont have to keep changing things. : )
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Wow this is highly original ... not!
I wonder how this sounds such a familiar idea for a piece of coursework?
Let’s see Jake Sibley’s blog:
"Man wakes up. His character and appearance is slowly revealed as he gets ready around his house ... Between each reveal we'll put in a title (with a straight cut leading into each one)”
Rob Henry Tom Jon’s Blog:
"We start with a montage of footage of the protagonist getting ready, but at this point it is uncertain who the protagonist is ... This is overlaid with the credits"
Jake and James Blog:
"After hearing a mysterious answering machine message ... where he meets his female contact"
Rob Henry Tom Jon's Blog:
"What he is going to do, over the phone. We still assume he is talking to the contact when he says ... girl"
Jake and James Blog:
"He then gets out ... where he meets his female contact. The package is then handed over...
The men ruthlessly kill the (unarmed) female contact"
Rob Henry Tom Jon's Blog:
"the now dead contact towards the protagonist picking up the money/ brief case"
Right so a montage of the main character getting ready? Split up with the titles? He isn't revealed to begin with? A female contact? Who dies? Briefcases?
Now theres plagiarism and then theres copying a IDEA WE MADE BEFORE YOU
THINK OF SOMETHING ORGINAL OR COMPLETELY DIFFERENT GUYS THIS IDEA IS TAKEN
I know there’s no abuse yada yada but this is seriously a load bull
From Jake Nicholls
please read my latest post, yeh u hav a right to be annoyed!!! wht's in rob's post is very like ure idea!!
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